Friday, 9 September 2011

The talking jelly bean

This is a story I wrote by myself at school. It is about a seagull not just any seagull a seagull who ate anyones food when they ate outside. This seagull was so bad no one ate outside in all of San  diego.  One lovely spring morning the seagull was flying around and he noticed people having dessert break feast and they were having jelly beans. The seagull licked his beak because jelly beans were his favourite food. when the seagull dived down to eat the jelly beans the jelly bean he was about to eat came alive. Who are - But before he could finish his sentence the jelly bean began fighting. I can't- but suddenly he remembered something he's a bird and bird can fly. He shot up and flew and he was so happy be away from the jelly bean that he didn't know that he could turn into a plane. When the jelly bean caught up with the seagull he started attacking more and he started to attack so much that he got a broken wing. As he fell a yellow jelly bean caught him and the yellow jelly bean caught him and when the red jelly bean flew down he got ate and the red jelly bean never came again. When the red jelly bean was gone the seagull and the yellow jelly bean were best friends. I hope you enjoyed the talking jelly bean.

3 comments:

  1. What a great story! I'll think twice before eating a jelly bean!

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  2. Every time I eat a jelly bean from now on I will think of you and your story. Maybe you will be a famous writer one day. I will be boasting to my friends saying, " That is my grand-daughter "
    Love Mamó xx

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  3. I loved this story!! I wish I had a great storyteller like you in my class, *Iola xx

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