Thursday, 26 January 2012

A trip to space

On tuesday I made a story called a trip to space. If you read a book called the hunger games you`ll see something in comman. Heres the story.

Kaboom! Our house lifted right off the ground and we were 16 inches away from space. HELP I kept on yelling. The reason we were going to space was because my mom, Kattniss and my annoying dad, Petta wanted to go to dumb space since they were little kids. I, Prim which is short for Primrose hated that horrible idea. It felt like a roller coaster getting up to space and I`m afraid of roller coasters. The reason we were travelling in our house was because my mom couldn`t afford a space ship. Finally we were at space. I did an excellent cartwheel but the ground felt cold. Why would the sun ever be cold? Mom and dad said we were going to land on the sun. I looked down and there it was white and dusty the moon. Great! The only good part about this vacation wasn`t happning. Who are you someone said. The voice didn`t sound like my mom or dad. I looked around we were surrounded by aileins. Who are you one of the ailens said again. P-P-Primrose I struggeled to say. K-K-Kattnis my mom said like she didn`t like the idea of going to space after all. Hi my name is Petta my dad said. I couldn`t believe it my dad actually said that with his eyes open. My mom and I held on to each other while my dad tugged on our sleves telling us to be friendly. After a while the aliens kidnapped us and hung us on a stick and fed us dog food. After months of being treated like that we got what we wanted. A real house made out of stick and real food. What a surprise we had a house on the moon.

4 comments:

  1. WOW! What an amazing post!. I like the way you used elements from both stories to create a new one all of your own. I recognized the names from the Hunger Games! I am glad that you are enjoying the book.

    Are you Prim in the story?

    I think that that was your best post ever! I really enjoyed reading it.

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  2. Your story reminds me a bit of the Wizard of Oz, where the wind lifts Dorothy and whisks her off.
    Sounds an interesting story.
    Hope the aliens turn out to be friendly.

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  3. at the start they arn't but in the end they are

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